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marking pauses
on page 40
between absence and desire:
yearning
© Zelda Reville
Day 20 uses the elevenie prompt, which seems like the English variant of the haiku, but with more allowances for extra lines. I’m liking the challenges so far!
Zelda Reville 
Awesome write….
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Thank you!
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My comment on your writing is an elevenie…
Poem
feelings reveal
yearning becoming thematic
maybe absence is desire?
excellent!
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Omg! You’ve interpretated the pathos of realization really well in your elevenie! This form is rather addictive 😂😭
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